Score: 8

"Pretty cool!"

submission: Newgrounds Helpful Guide

date: August 24, 2008

'How the quiz looks' - It looks great, the game got the same colours as Newgrounds, orange and black. The font of the questions is the same as the font on Newgrounds too ( or it just looks alot like it). This is good, because the whole quiz is about Newgrounds.

Sound - The tune of the first menu was pretty funny, but kinda immature.
This quiz haves to be made seriously so that's why I think it doesn't fits in.
It made me smile though =)
The song in the game isn't really the best song I've heard, but it fits good with a quiz like this.
It's also great that you added a mute button, not many games got those.

The quiz - The questions and the answers are good, but the best answer is predictable.
That's because the best answers of questions 3-10 is always D, and the worst answer is A.
But I guess that's why you have to be honest for this quiz.

The good thing about this quiz is that you made explanations for all the questions, it made this quiz very helpfull and you can actually learn something from it.
So yeah, good job.

Points of improvement:

You could shuffle the answers next time, and maybe add a few extra songs so you can choose what song you want.
10 questions isn't really much, the quiz could be a bit longer with some more questions.
There's not really much to improve actually.

Overall:

It's a nice quiz with good colours and it's great that it teaches you how to be a good Newgrounder.
It's also funny to know how helpfull you are for the Newgrounds community.
Keep the good guides coming!

4/5
8/10

-=Nick=-

Score: 9

"Awesome Game!"

submission: Orange Runner

date: August 21, 2008

Graphics/Animation - The game doesn't looks that great, but decent.
The back and foreground could have been drawn a bit better, just like the stick figure.
But I really liked the 'shield' when you pick the shield item up, the effects are amazing.
Graphics are definitely the worst thing of this game, but everything still looks nice and smooth so it doesn't really matters.

Sound - The song you've used is great and fits perfectly for this game, so good job on that.
But I missed the sound effects.

Gameplay - Well this game is just awesome and VERY addicting, I can't stop playing it.
The dodging of the objects doesn't makes the running boring, and the actual racing by pressing the spacebar makes the game harder, but better.

Points of Improvement:

Some stuff could be drawn on the foreground too, like some grass or other things, and there could be trees on the background.

You could have added some sound effects when you pick up an item or when you hit a 'spinning chainsaw thingy' ( I don't know how you call that).
You could even add some sound effects when you go over a button.
I think all these stuff would have made the game even better.

Overall:

You could improve alot on this game, but it's a really addicting and great game, and that should be the thing that counts.
You did a great job with this game, thumbs up!

I hope that there'll be a sequal!

4/5
9/10

-=Nick=-

Score: 0

"Awesome?"

submission: Awesome Center Redux

date: August 20, 2008

First off all, I have to say that I've always been a big fan of the awesome series.
I LOVED all the Compilations and Metal Gear Awesome, but this movie didn't made me laugh once.

You made the first part run a bit slower, I thought it was better this way.
Lots of 'critics' reviewed your series and said that they didn't liked it because it was going too fast.
You listened to them, good job on that.
I saw an improvement of the animations and the graphics, but it still was typical for your style.
I always loved your style, so good job on that too.

You must be wondering: "Why does he gives me zero stars when he claims that I improved my movie alot?"
Well that's the reason why I'm writing this review, and here's why:
CANCER JOKES AREN"T FUNNY WHEN A FAMILY MEMBER IS DYING BECAUSE OF THIS!

You see, I always had alot of respect for you and your series, but this just ruined the whole series for me.
Words cannot describe how I felt after that joke, that's how sad I was.

Please think about your jokes before you make them, you might lose many fans if you don't do that.

-=Nick=-

Score: 10

"A masterpiece."

submission: Happeh Clokk Dhey!

date: August 15, 2008

Graphics - The graphics and animation are great, one of the best I've seen this clockday. Thumbs up!

Sound - Very funny voices, they made me laugh. They made the movie even better!

Storyline - I didn't really saw a storyline, just some random short sketches but ah well, 'I eat shit for breakfast' was kinda funny.

Great flash, keep the good work up!

Happy Clockday!

5/5
10/10

-=Nick=-

Score: 9

"Nice collab!"

submission: The Music Video Collab

date: June 23, 2008

It's a collab, so it's pretty hard to review but I just review every single part of it:

Simple-line - See the world:
His parts definitely have the worst graphics, just a few simple lines and that's it.
The characters he drew are just so simple, and because he did the first part I thought that the whole flash would have this poor graphics..

But the storyline of the first part is definitely the funniest, it made me laugh.
But if he would have drawn it better it would be even better!

raz183 - Rock the Dragon:
It starts of great, cool graphics and animation.
Then a decent fighting scene and then it suddenly ends!
I don't get the joke or the story , is this just a random battle?
I don't think this belongs in a music collab, but it was decent..

Lifes-a-bitch - Jason 'shyboy' Arnold:
I don't have much to say about this one, it haves a great animation and graphics, they are way better then the previous ones.
And it just fit's perfectly with the song, so it's pretty cool!

Simple-one - Obstacle 1:
I really didn't understand this one, it's just a squid with a guitar and some drumbs who are poorly animated.
It wasn't really funny, just awkward..

GlowingMonkey - somebody told me:
Very short but pretty funny, the background is pretty awkward but the characters are pretty cool.
Cool graphics and nice animation!

Simple-line - enter a uh:
This part definitely got better graphics and animation then his previous parts!
But the song was just awfull to hear and I thought the story was pretty awkward.
Nevertheless, I think this is cool since the graphics are a lot better..

CobaltChloride - From the Floorboards Up:
I think this is the best part of the whole collab, it haves the best animation and graphics, the storyline is funny yet cool and the song is great.
Great job CobaltChloride!

helang7 - Get low:
Ok this was pretty random, the background was very nice and the bee looked decent.
The song is awesome but what's the point of this? The bee's just moving up and down and shaking a bit. It's pointless!

GlowingMonkey - Nothing At All:
Your other part got better graphics, but I kinda like this one too.
The storyline was funny and unexpected just like the other one, good job on that!

Simple-line - Obstacle 2:
The best animation and graphics he done so far, I think this one is great!
It's funny and it haves good graphics.
Just kinda awkward characters, they look really weird.
If he did all his parts in this style it would be way better!

stickmanslasherguy - Around the world:
It's just a loop with decent graphics and animation.
The fact that it's just a loop makes it funny, he's just singing the same over and over again.
I laughed hard when I saw this, good job!

RESPRiT - Through the fire and flames:
The graphics and animation are just awesome in this one, it's really really nice!
The song is awesome and the story is cool since he's playing the intro of the song.
But I was just getting into the song and then the song suddenly stopped..
I was like: Huh? This was just turning out to be great and then it suddenly stopped!

Simple-Line: My smile is a rifle:
Funny yet simple, graphics are decent but the story is funny.
It tricked me when the screen zoomed out, I thought it was just a tunnel and not a bullet wound.

Overall points of approvement:
You should put like 1-2 seconds between every part, like a fading screen or something else. Since now a part suddenly ends and another suddenly starts, it's confusing if you watch it the first time.

The list of participants, artists and songs in order of appearance isn't correct, I reviewed it in order of appearence so you should change that.

Overall:
I like this collab, you all have very different drawing styles and that's what makes it cool.
Most of the parts were funny , but there could be some improvements in some parts.
I think you all did a great job with this collab, I can't wait to see a second one if there's gonna be one!

Thumbs up!

And yes, this haves to be my longest review ever..

4/5
9/10

-=Nick=-

Score: 9

"Haha!"

submission: Dumbledore is Gay

date: June 19, 2008

Very very funny!

Cool animation and graphics, the animation is smooth and the graphics are better then the average flash on NG

Very funny storyline, you did a great job with the jokes you've put in!
You put in some famous Harry Potter characters like Snape, Harry and Hermione.. but I think Ron should've been in it too..
I laughed alot , it's kinda sick but just genious..
The funniest part was with the spells, erectie dickie!

The voices are great, Dumbledore got the perfect pedophilish voice!
And I think the voices of the other characters look alot like the original ones, so that's great too!
Funny song at the end, it fits in perfectly!

I always knew that Dumbledore is gay!

4/5
9/10

-=Nick=-

Score: 8

"Not bad.. not bad at all.."

submission: Death Eagle: Remake

date: June 18, 2008

It was pretty good, the graphics aren't that bad, they could be better but I think they are decent..
The animation could be a bit better, they don't bend their arms/legs which makes the movie look a bit weird..

The story is pretty cool, it's kinda like rambo... 1 guy who's killing everyone...
The guy get's hit too, but I didn't really saw him suffering, if you would have done that it will make the viewer get more involved with the main character..
I only don't understand where that missile suddenly came from, it made me a bit confused..
And it's good that you did some hand to hand combat too, although it was short it's better then just some shooting..

The music rocks, I always loved that song and I always will!
The sound effects are pretty cool too, gunfires and explosions are always awesome!

I think it's great that you added some information about the guns and enemys, you don't see that alot and I think alot of stories need that so good job on that!

This flash is way better then the original one, but I guess that's why it's called a remake..

Keep up the good work!

4/5
8/10

-=Nick=-

Score: 10

"Very very deep.."

submission: super happy fun life

date: June 16, 2008

I thought it's a very cool flash , it's a bit wierd but I like that..
The straight lines that turn into curves are a bit annoying to watch, but it makes the flash stand out and very artistic.

It's story is kinda deep and weird, but I understand it after reading your blog..
I really love the story, it made me think about life...and you're trying to give a message to the world, I respect that..

The song you've used is pretty good, it fits perfectly with the flash..
The lyrics give the flash a deeper meaning, if we tolerate this our children will be next..
It means we have to do something now or everyone we love will feel bad..

Your drawing style is pretty cool, it's not perfect but that's not necessary in this flash since it's all about the meaning..

I give you a 10 because you made me think about life...

10/10

-=Nick=-

Score: 10

"Very cool!"

submission: Predator Series Preview X

date: June 10, 2008

Although the text in the beginning was so fast I couldn't read the whole thing
(probaly since my main language isn't English) it was very good!
But I've read a bit of it, and I thought the story was great!

It was a preview so it's hard to review but I'll try!

I really , really love your drawing style!
It's not really great but still, it aint that bad..
The blood could have been a bit better, it looks more funny then creepy..
You've used white shapes with a dark background, which makes the preview looks scary but exciting..

The music is just great, it's the perfect music for a preview about a predator!
The sound effects that you've used are pretty cool too, I love the classic evil laugh!

The storyline is just awesome.. you see the creepy eyes in the beginning, then you see the predator's face and body.. followed by words, and then you see the pray..
It builds up tension pretty good, which is the main thing a preview should do..
So great job with that!

Overall it's a perfect preview, filled with zooming text, bright flashes and some fast speed editing..

I'm looking forward to see the full movie!

10/10 <3

-=Nick=-

Score: 8

"Haha!"

submission: Gunbot Proluge

date: June 2, 2008

This was pretty funny... I kinda like the joke you put in the story..

The animations were quite nice, I really liked the robot.. although the professor could look a bit better..

The sounds fit great in the story, it's evil and the sound effects of the robot sound nice..

It's an original and funny story, pretty short though but I still like it!

8/10

-=Nick=-